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When we first met i wanted "him",
It started off okay - you were a good friend.

But as time went on I started to see,
You were it - the one for me.

As we talked more and more feelings grew,
I spent nights wondering if you loved me like i loved you.

Then you said it and tears filled my eyes,
You loved me too - how'd i meet the perfect guy?

I love you so much although we're so far apart,
but you're always here in my heart.

We talk on the phone all hours of the night,
sometimes just laughing - sometimes we fight.

You say give it time and see how thing work out,
but i never think i can go go one more day without.

My baby in my arms holding me tight,
long walks on the beach and kisses goodnight.

I love you forever - however long that may be,
without you i'm nothing - why can't you see?

You make me laugh and even cry,
please never ever say goodbye.

I feel so high and i'll never come down,
atleast not while you're around.

At night i hold my pillow wishing it was you,
missing you so much - what do i do?

I wish i was really yours baby - you wouldn't understand,
I wish you were here - holding my hand.

As i sit here by the phone waiting to call,
I cry realizing you're not really mine - not at all.

I'd give the world to hold you for one night,
I cant' wait till im there with you - making everything alright.
©2004-2010 ~xXBrokenBeautyXx
:iconxxbrokenbeautyxx:

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Poem I wrote for the guy i love :/

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:iconcupcake23:
This is wonderful. You showed a lot of love and pain. Very nicely written :D
:iconsomething-original:
I remember feeling like this...I really relate to this poem. Well done, though it makes me rather sad.

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If it's not worth doing to the extreme, it's not worth doing at all.

"Water comes from the sky... Says it all, really..."
:iconlabula:
Yea I know who that is....
:iconxxbrokenbeautyxx:
Thank you.. you always have the nicest hings to say. I'm sorry it makes you sad, but it sort of makes me sad too.

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"I find it kind of funny, yet I find it kind of sad that the dreams in which i'm dying are the best i've ever had" -Gary Jules
*~* PrOuD MeMbEr Of : ~Emotional-Writings , ~TheOmenPoets , and =PoetryPlease*~*
:iconbleeding-wickedly:
another beautiful poem I love it :heart:
:hug:
xxxx

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Like a little child I'm captivated...and I can't turn myself away
:heart:~ToThyneGrave:heart:
:iconkutieangel:
I hope you get your guy in your arms soon :) Very romantic poem by the way.

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I :heart: =phlud
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No ones a virgin, life screws us all! :shakefist:
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:bookdiva: *Emotional-Writings :pencil:
:iconzacha:
Just wonderful. Completely amazing... *stunned*

Especially the line At night i hold my pillow wishing it was you,
missing you so much - what do i do?

That is memories for me... hugging my pillow tight...

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"Everything I have written may be wrong."
:icondead-kitten:
this one flows very freely and its really good. sad though, i htink we've all felt like this. i hope you are better though..

:clap: i likes :)

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if you feel i have been a bitch to you well.. i really don't care, but if you need an answer, then you must have Lied to me, Hurt me, pissed me off, or i just cant stand you. Please Categorize yourself. and feel free to NOT tell me.

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